Bluefire~ShadowClan « Thread Started on Apr 19, 2008, 9:10am »
Name: Bluefire
Clan: ShadowClan
Rank: Deputy (if that's ok)
Age: 15 moons
Gender: Female
Picture: n/a
Description: Bluefire is a sleek grey tabby she-cat. She has ice blue eyes that seem to look into your very soul. Her tail is unusally long and is most of the time swishing back and forth. She inheirited very long claws from her father, Blacknight. Her teeth are somewhat blunt but can cause a painful bite on an enemy or prey. Her paws seem to be big compared to the rest of her body.
History: Bluefire was born to Blacknight and Rainbowpelt. She had two other brothers, Reedpaw and Brightsun. Reedpaw died during apprenticeship due to a nasty rabid fox bite. Brightsun seems to always be plotting something. Bluefire has never had any kits before because all of the toms she meets just don't fit her standards. Her mentor, Owltail taught her well and she soon became a warrior and later on, deputy.
Personality: Bluefire is a louder type cat. She was very curious when she was a kit,and a trace of this curiousness still exists in adulthood. She loves being the center of attention. She dreams of one day becoming leader but won't do anything to harm her leader. Her sudden outbursts at meetings and Gatherings will sometimes cause trouble, but she always escapes it somehow. She may be loud and sometimes annoying, but her kind nature and friendliness will always win you over.
Example of rping(IC): "Bluefire, wait up!" yowled Brightsun. Bluefire kept running and called, "No you hurry up!" They were on their way back to camp from a dawn patrol. Then a painfully familar scent entered Bluefire's mouth and she abruptly stopped, causing Brightsun to bump into her. "Hey Bluefire, what is it?" Brightsun asked. "Scent the air, stupid furball, and you'll see what's the matter!" mewed Bluefire. Brightsun parted his jaws and scented the air. "Foxes!" he hissed. "We better report this, Bluefire." "Too late," she squeaked. "What do you mean, too late?" mewed Brightsun. Then the bushes rustled and a fox leapt out, its hungry eyes looking at Bluefire. "Bluefire, run!" mewed Brightsun. But Bluefire seemed to be elsewhere in time. "Bluefire! No!" yowled Brightsun as the fox leapt forward, its sharp teeth gleaming in the sun...
Rainbowstorm, please do not think you can accept someone. That is for the admins job ONLY.
You could have said, "Oh, that was great! I wish an admin would accept you..." Instead of thinking you can just accept her.
Oh gosh, I'm turning into a mean admin! hehe.
And yeah, Bluefire, 15 moons?!? My cat was warrior at 12 moons, but still... And don't they need like one apprentice before they may be deputy? I would say making her like 18 moons the youngest if she was deputy.
Description: Bluefire is a sleek grey tabby she-cat. She has ice blue eyes that seem to look into your very soul. Her tail is unusally long and is most of the time swishing back and forth. She inheirited very long claws from her father, Blacknight. Her teeth are somewhat blunt but can cause a painful bite on an enemy or prey. Her paws seem to be big compared to the rest of her body.
History: Bluefire was born to Blacknight and Rainbowpelt. She had two other brothers, Reedpaw and Brightsun. Reedpaw died during apprenticeship due to a nasty rabid fox bite. Brightsun seems to always be plotting something. Bluefire has never had any kits before because all of the toms she meets just don't fit her standards. Her mentor, Owltail taught her well and she soon became a warrior and later on, deputy.
Personality: Bluefire is a louder type cat. She was very curious when she was a kit,and a trace of this curiousness still exists in adulthood. She loves being the center of attention. She dreams of one day becoming leader but won't do anything to harm her leader. Her sudden outbursts at meetings and Gatherings will sometimes cause trouble, but she always escapes it somehow. She may be loud and sometimes annoying, but her kind nature and friendliness will always win you over.
Example of rping(IC): "Bluefire, wait up!" yowled Brightsun. Bluefire kept running and called, "No you hurry up!" They were on their way back to camp from a dawn patrol. Then a painfully familar scent entered Bluefire's mouth and she abruptly stopped, causing Brightsun to bump into her. "Hey Bluefire, what is it?" Brightsun asked. "Scent the air, stupid furball, and you'll see what's the matter!" mewed Bluefire. Brightsun parted his jaws and scented the air. "Foxes!" he hissed. "We better report this, Bluefire." "Too late," she squeaked. "What do you mean, too late?" mewed Brightsun. Then the bushes rustled and a fox leapt out, its hungry eyes looking at Bluefire. "Bluefire, run!" mewed Brightsun. But Bluefire seemed to be elsewhere in time. "Bluefire! No!" yowled Brightsun as the fox leapt forward, its sharp teeth gleaming in the sun...
umm, u don't have to press quote......seriously, just go to the top of the page where your FIRST post was, with her bio. Press modify, BETWEEN quote and delete, then a box will show up at the top with what you had wrote in it, like when you reply, and you just modify, then press, the box at the bottom saying modify post, and it will submit the modified post